Week 8 Comments and Feedback

The feedback I have been getting in has been very helpful in developing how my website and story is shaping up. As for my feedback out I feel that I may not be the most helpful. I feel weird leaving comments on peoples work but I try my best to provide my insight to others work. Blog comments have been nice and Ive been skimming through the comments and making peoples presence known. I look forward to seeing how some of the stories that I follow shape up and I look forward to peoples comments back on my work. It is very helpful.

(Cheezburger)




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